- Tue, 16:17: I'm so stupid. Might help if I actually EXPLAINED the boy's damage & why he reacts like he does to the idea of women getting hurt for him.
- Tue, 16:24: I don't think Prissy's name ever even comes up in the entirety of the book. Ever. Let alone what happened to her. That needs to be EARLY.
- Tue, 20:09: The handsome and hardworking Patrick Tracy has successfully talked me off a ledge. I honestly think I can do this now.
- Tue, 23:51: Hey, I get to excise this sketchy part where my character intercepts a phone call. Win. #amediting