"The God of War and the Prince of Peace walk into a pub..." It sounds like the start of a bad joke, and the story isn't really funny (I don't think, but I could be wrong), but I rather like the weirdo little thing. I don't think I've ever used Jesus as a character before. Angels and demons, yes. Jesus Himself, no. Heaven help me.
Now I have to pound it (as always) into something that doesn't suck. This one strikes me as, possibly, Too Easy, Drill Sergeant, so I'll have to examine that and see what I think, and what my betas think
And, of course, it needs a title. But. Uh. Two stories this week. Short, but "finished," for certain values of "finished." I am well pleased.