October 3rd, 2006

wolf eyes

The story...

continues apace.

Today's word count: 744
Total word count including revisions: 1193

One phenomenon I noticed while writing this is the one that plagues slash writers: Pronoun confusion. We have a man inside a horse observing his own body. For awhile he's not even sure that he and the horse have done a swap.

That being said, had the horse been a mare rather than a gelding, I think it would have been worse.

I think I'm going to sleep on the next part.