The story has a "the end" at the bottom of it.
I'm not sure I'm happy with it.
And if I'm not sure I'm happy with it, that generally means that I'm unhappy with it.
It's sitting at 1988 words. Naturally, it still needs a title. I think I'm going to put it to bed and look at it with fresh eyes in the morning. Maybe print it out and go over it with the Red Pen of Doom.