And he likes it.
*does a little dance*
Naturally, he's given me some more suggestions. And I'm gleefully incorporating them. Also, I realized that they wouldn't send a regular cop to arrest her--more than likely, this would be an FBI matter. This is one of the more simple changes. Most of the other stuff is just adding on here and there and figuring out a graceful way to do it.
I've also named the orca, and the boat. Because it's more personal that way. Never let it be said that I'm afraid of gut-punching my characters.