Well. The actual!Iron Man fic is as done as I'm going to get it. It's... short. Mercifully. About 1200 words.
What is it with me breaking my favorite characters? Gaaaaah. He'll get over it, but damn. And there's some nice interaction here. And one of my famous open-ended endings.
I don't usually use a beta for fanfic, but this being my first Iron Man story, maybe I should. Thus the pondering.
Eh. Any takers? I'll format it in html.
Ninja-edit: FIC REC! Tony + Pepper IM conversation. Hilarious.