February 2nd, 2013

wolf eyes

My tweets

  • Fri, 13:17: Maybe I should print this and go after it with a red pen the old-fashioned way. THIRTY-TWO PAGES. And you novelists can stop laughing at me.
  • Fri, 22:49: Second editing pass done. 171 words whacked out. This is what I get for writing spare in the first place. Still need to excise 2000+. Ugh.
  • Sat, 08:45: Today, more editing. Let's see how many words I can weed-whack today. #amediting Good news is, I love this story SO MUCH.
  • Sat, 11:51: "...with a pleased smile on his face." Well, YES. Where ELSE would a smile be? #headdesk #amediting
Over My Head

I am now in the middle of my THIRD editing pass.

I've managed to whack it down to under 19,000 words. Barely. I do not see how I chainsaw 2,000 words out of this. I really don't.

But. Once I finish this pass, then I'll print it out and go over it with red pen on paper, the old-fashioned way. Hopefully get at least part of it done before the Super Bowl.

And, you know, it is what it is. If I can't get it down to the 17K that's the upper limit for WotF, then I'll send it to the markets that take stuff longer than that. This one is just as problematic a sell as my "guy sells soul to devil" story, if not more so, because we have angels (who are good guys), demons (who are actual bad guys and not misunderstood woobies, although one is sympathetic), and a serial killer (who is a real asshole). So, yeah. I realize that about this, and I'm okay with it. I love this story and whacking stuff out of it wholesale is not the way to go here, I don't think.

Also, I'm planning on posting it here for the Usual Suspects. If you click that link and nothing comes up, you're not on the list. If you'd like to be on the list, or would like to be taken off it, shoot me a note. :) This one will probably take three posts, because, you know, long story is long.

All right. *girds loins* Back to it.