I printed out Angry Bitter Angel with the intention of going over it with the Red Pen of Doom. But I've done three editing passes on it, and now every time I sit down to look at it, I go crosseyed. I'm not quite ready to post it here yet, though.
Fortunately, I have four other stories to work on instead. It's not like Angry Bitter Angel is going anywhere; those pages will still be there when I'm ready to take them up again.
So, instead, I think I'll open up the Zombunny story and see if I still like it.