After answering those questions I asked myself. I don't know if it's Done yet, but it's vastly improved.
It still needs a title, natch, and I'll poke it a few more times and give it to my Writing Buddy too. Maybe post it up here now that I think it's better, for the Usual Suspects. It's knocking on 11K words right now. Which, argh, but I need them, so.
Not sure where I'll send it first. Maybe F&SF. Longer stuff means fewer markets. *sigh*
I may have good news on the BearFic front come June. Stay tuned.