Julie Frost, SFF writer (agilebrit) wrote,
Julie Frost, SFF writer

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*smacks Muse upside the head*

You know, putting this:

Because he wasn't dead. She refused, utterly, to believe that he was.

Right before the scene where not!Harry wakes up? Is the exact opposite of "ratcheting up the tension" here.

*growls and fixes*

She hated to admit it, but she honestly thought that Janni was right. If Marilyn and Alex brought anything back...it would be a body.

Yeah, that's better.
Tags: pack dynamics, snippets, writing process
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